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A river runs through it

It’s a rare talent that can begin a story with its tragic conclusion and tell it so engrossingly that the reader is nevertheless shocked to arrive once again at the ending. Charles Roe displays such talent in his fourth novel, Barren River, a gripping tale of friendship, betrayal, love, and loss set in the cave country of southern Kentucky.

The story opens with a coroner’s inquest into the death of Morgan Hargett, who met his end while exploring a cave with his best friend Arnie Travers. After being trapped in the cave for hours, Arnie found a way out and returned, too late, with help. Suspicion falls on the survivor in the minds of some, but the jury eventually decides that the death was accidental. Intent on retribution, Morgan’s widow then takes matters into her own hands, plunging the town of Greenfield back into incredulous grief.

After this prologue the narrative shifts to the ill-fated caving excursion, which serves as a backdrop for all but the final chapter of the novel. From the outset there are signs that things will not turn out well: a forgotten rope, a slipped knot, a foothold that gives way. Prepared and provisioned only for a brief scouting foray, Morgan and Arnie find themselves on a full-blown expedition to secure their very survival.

The taut description of their underground ordeal is punctuated by flashbacks to events from the months leading up to the calamitous venture. Morgan and Arnie consider what has happened between them during that time, and between each of them and Verna, Morgan’s wife, and Fern, Arnie’s new love interest. The cave, with its treacherous terrain and disorienting darkness, is eerily analogous to the confusing landscape of human relationships in which the two men find themselves.

As the narrative unfolds within the cave and without, the mystery deepens: what actually took place between them in the chill blackness, and how did Morgan die? The gravity of the situation forces the trapped men to grapple with their inner demons, and each makes choices that ultimately and inadvertently bring tragedy down upon them both.

Barren River has elements of romance, intrigue, mystery, and morality, but as a whole it is a nuanced exploration of the unraveling of the human heart under the quiet frictions of daily living as well as the pressure of extreme circumstances. The principal characters’ joys and struggles are universal and familiar, and the rural small town setting creates an intimacy that deepens their poignancy. Most pleasing of all, it is a tale so well told that the reader is taken as unawares as the characters by the final act of shattering violence foretold in the prologue.

Barren River by Charles L. Roe © 2008 (AuthorHouse)  ISBN: 978-1434376343  248 pages  Paperback  $9.95 (US) www.authorhouse.com/bookstore

The write stuff

As a writer, I think I’ve discovered my metier, the genre in which I excel above all others: letters. Unfortunately, that’s kind of like taking a career aptitude test and finding that you are best suited to be a cooper. It’s not an entirely obsolete field, but there’s not much call for it these days and the job opportunities are pretty limited.

How do I know this? I’ve tried my hand at an awful lot of writing over the years; I even got paid for some of it, though never all that well. In recent years I’ve worked at it more deliberately and diligently, determined to find a way to make some kind of living at it. I’ve had no success as yet, but I’m not giving up. Heck, I’m just getting started!

I’ve learned that I don’t have a novel in me right now, at least not one anywhere near enough to the boat that I can land it. I seem to be able to write very, very short pieces — poetry, flash fiction, anecdotes — which is quite encouraging. I haven’t found a market for the stuff yet, but at least I enjoy it and feel reasonably competent about doing it. That’s more than half the battle.

Today, however, I realized in the shower (which is where all truly useful and brilliant thoughts occur to me) that the writing I love most and do the best is letter writing. I even spent my drying time analyzing why.

1. A letter has no plot. It has purpose, which may be singular or plural, but it doesn’t have to conform to content expectations the way a story or essay does. A letter can develop in a linear fashion, but it can just as easily meander or jump around.

2. A letter’s structure is chiefly physical in nature. It has certain functional parts (salutation, body, closing, signature) that take specific forms defined by cultural convention and dictated by purpose.

3. A letter has no specified length. I have written letters that were ten pages long, double-sided, and letters that were two paragraphs of two or three sentences each.

4. A letter is personal. It may be formal or intimate, but it is always a direct and personal communication. That’s why form letters bother us so much: they intentionally violate the essential nature of the letter as a form of communication.

Alas, even were letter writing not so unfashionable as it is these days, it would hardly offer much opportunity for income or gainful employment. I clearly haven’t yet found an answer in my pursuit of a successful writing career, but I do feel as though I’ve uncovered an important clue. I don’t quite know what to make of it; I guess I’ll just keep working at it until something falls into place or the next clue appears. I do hope, however, that happens sooner rather than later.

On truth and fiction

A friend recently told me about something odd that once happened to her in a writing class. The assignment was an exercise in showing rather than telling: write a short piece in which one character discovers that his or her spouse is having an affair, without anyone explicitly saying so. Inspired by a comment the instructor made to a male student in the class, my friend wrote a piece in which a man finds out that his wife’s involvement with her business partner, another woman, extends beyond the strictly professional.

After this piece was read as part of the class critique process, my friend says that her classmates assumed she must be a lesbian and hit on her steadily until the end of the semester — men and women alike. As it happened, my friend was newly divorced and not interested in a relationship with anyone of any gender or orientation, so this was an especially annoying development. The experience further made my friend extremely cautious about sharing her writing within a group of any kind — what if she wrote about a character who was a serial killer or a user of illegal drugs? Who knows what kind of crazy things her fellow writers might assume about her!

I told her I always assume that everyone is bisexual, though I prefer the term ambisextrous (it sounds less clinical and more fun). I figure I can’t go wrong — I’m neither surprised nor caught in an awkward position when someone expresses or reveals a sexual preference. She found this delightfully funny, and I hope it reassured her that not everyone leaps to judgment about an author, especially when it comes to fiction.

I didn’t ask her how long ago or where this happened, though clearly it didn’t take place during her undergraduate days at a respected southern Bible college. Nevertheless I was startled that students in this day and age (relatively speaking) would draw a conclusion like that from such scant and flimsy evidence. I was even more surprised that students in a fiction writing class, of all places, would imagine such a direct correlation between an author and the details of her writing.

My non-literal way of reading must be even further out of the mainstream than I realized. Maybe all the hysteria surrounding Harry Potter or The DaVinci Code, for example, accurately reflects the state of the American mind rather than the lunatic fringe. If so, then perhaps the educational system aimed a bit wide of the mark in the late 20th century with its focus on standardized testing and quantifiable results. Public responses to literary offerings may be a far more informative measure of educational success than grade point averages and test scores.

Lives of their own

Books have lives, and stuff happens to them that you never planned. — Amity Schlaes

The life of Amity Schlaes’ 2007 book The Forgotten Man has become very interesting lately. According to a Politico article, the book has become a bit of a hot ticket because of its critical stance on the New Deal. The article quotes a Washington, DC, bookseller: “If all my books sold that well, I’d be a rich man.” That’s sweet music to an author’s ears.

The author herself seems to have a healthy sense of detachment from her work, boundaries she diplomatically articulates in the article.  She deflects effusive praise by emphasizing her reasoning and approach when writing the book. (Great PR lesson there, fellow writers — redirect attention to the book.) While clearly pleased by the attention the book is getting, she distances herself from any uses to which its words may be put. Using a quote or idea from a book to support an argument does not equate to an endorsement of that argument by the book’s author, a subtle point of reason that is too often overlooked in the current age of sound bites.

May we all enjoy such good fortune as to have our books become the darling of some highly visible demographic, and may we all be blessed with such a sense of calm perspective as Ms. Schlaes!

Spun story

I used an online story prompt device called Story Spinner to give me an idea for something to write. This is what I came up with:

The building in which they met had once been a ladies’ undergarment factory on the wrong side of the tracks. Now it housed a Japanese noodle house, a dry cleaner, and stylish loft apartments. Their mutual friend Patty had set them up on a blind lunch date.

“There’s a built-in time limit,” she said to each of them. “You both only have an hour for lunch. If you consider travel time to and from the restaurant plus time to order and eat, you only really have to make conversation for 20 minutes or so.”

Patty could be very persuasive. She even arranged with the owner of the restaurant to pay the bill for the meal herself. “How can you say no to a free lunch?” she weedled, knowing this was an argument that no guy could resist. Mike caved pretty quickly; he really liked udon.

“All right!” Joyce surrendered, throwing her hands in the air. “I’ll go. But only if you swear never to do anything like this again!” She glared at Patty, who agreed a little too readily, solemnly vowing never to fix Joyce up on a date again. Joyce scowled, but she had already said she would go. She, at least, would keep her word.

Joyce arrived first because her workplace was in the next block. She chose a table near the door, where the lunch traffic might afford a distraction and she could make a quick getaway if necessary. Mr. Yoshi himself came to the table when he saw her sit down.

“Don’t worry,” he beamed at her reassuringly, “Patty is a good friend.” Joyce rolled her eyes but managed to smile back.

The door opened, and a man entered and looked about, clearly searching for someone. Mr. Yoshi ushered him to the table where Joyce sat, then hurried off to the kitchen to bring them tea. Joyce took a deep breath.

“You must be Mike,” she said to her table companion, with a smile that hardly looked at all nervous. He nodded and smiled back.

“You must be Joyce,” he replied.

Another forehead-slapping moment

I’ve been working on my fiction writing lately and talking quite a bit with other writers about their work. Last week I finished listening to an unabridged audio version of a bestselling novel and realized that I’ve been working way too hard at this. I enjoyed the novel; the plot was interesting, the characters were quirky, the dialogue was hysterically funny, and the situations were wacky and amusing. It was a very entertaining read, but not even the author would call it great literature. She has published dozens of novels in various genres, all best-sellers, and makes a good living at it. She writes to formula, but her work isn’t hackneyed because she brings her imagination and sense of humor to bear on the aspects of each novel that aren’t governed by the formula: character, dialogue, setting, and plot details.

I don’t have to write great literature to be a successful writer. In fact, I’m far more likely to be successful if I don’t write great literature. That may seem surprisingly obvious, but it’s a blazing revelation that takes all kinds of pressure off my writing.

Now I just have to get myself to believe it.

The more elusive satisfaction of writing

“I asked myself how to weigh the easy pleasure of gardening against the more elusive satisfaction of writing. And how to compare the private playfulness of growing flowers with the public experience of being published.” — Laurie Lisle, Four Tenths of an Acre

Yesterday I ruminated about the external nature of gardening and the internal nature of writing. Ms. Lisle is right, however, that gardening is a private pursuit in that one grows flowers, vegetables, herbs, and so on for one’s own pleasure, whereas publication has the word “public” as its root: the whole point is to get your work to as many people as might find it interesting or useful. How neatly paradoxical!

Ms. Lisle also describes the pleasure of gardening as easy and the satisfaction of writing as elusive. This must be in some measure due to the fact that success in gardening does not depend on others while success in writing is completely dependent on others. There is no audience in gardening, no market on whose vicissitudes one’s success hinges. There are most certainly forces beyond the gardener’s control that affect success — weather, pests, etc. — but plants have their own innate motivation and urge to succeed. The gardener merely needs to clear the way, so to speak.

One’s writing has no such inborn drive to succeed. In fact, more writing has died without ever seeing the light of day than has been published — talk about survival of the fittest! In this case, however, it is not necessarily the fittest work that survives as much as that which is championed by the most persistent or creative or fortunate advocate, be it author, editor, or agent. Wouldn’t it be lovely if a writer only had to clear the way!

Maybe the satisfaction of writing will prove to be less elusive in the digital world. E-books, blogs, e-zines, and web sites make it much easier for writers to get their work before an audience. I don’t know if it will ever catch up with gardening, but I think writing in this century will be a much more rewarding activity than it was by the end of the previous century.

The gardener who writes

“That afternoon I was struck by how much more gratifying gardening was than writing.” — Laurie Lisle, Four Tenths of an Acre

There are lots of reasons why this should be so, some quite obvious and others quite subtle. Gardening is an external, largely physical activity; writing is an internal, largely cerebral activity. One might be tempted to say that gardening is more satisfying because it yields more immediately visible results, yet writing very visibly transforms the blank page, filling it with form and content and meaning. Comparing the two is, in some sense, comparing apples to oranges; the alignment of their similarities and dissimilarities is too complex and nuanced to permit a straightforward analysis.

Maybe the answer lies not in the relative merits of these exercises but in their place on the evolutionary timeline of human behavior. Using the broader meaning of the terms, gardening clearly developed much earlier than writing and was practiced more widely throughout a greater portion of human history. It makes sense that the activities of gardening might be connected to more ancient areas of our brain, areas that are tied more closely to primitive motives of survival and pleasure than the language processing regions of the brain, which are relative newcomers on the developmental scene.

I suppose the real wonder is that any of us find the will to leave off gardening for anything other than eating or making love.

The writer’s dilemma

In a report on NPR’s All Things Considered yesterday, fantasy writer Naomi Novik said something that really got my attention: “The biggest danger to most authors, to most storytellers, is not that somebody is going to steal your work and pass it along — it is that nobody is ever going to see your work.”

The quote, part of a story on anti-piracy technology in e-books, perfectly captures the conflict that writers (and most other artists) face, a dynamic tension that can leave the cautious nearly paralyzed. If I put my work out into the public arena, will something happen to it, or to me? If I don’t put my work out there, what’s the point? This is especially painful if one dreams of making some kind of living from one’s work; the old saw, “Why buy the cow when you can get the milk for free?” comes unhelpfully to mind.

I know a writer who has been shopping a science fiction novella around for a couple of years. He’s gotten a nibble or two, but no solid bites. Because his story has been making the rounds, he is concerned that someone might lift his idea, which is admittedly pretty original, and beat him to the publishing punch. This concern has grown to such a degree that he decided to publish the story himself rather than risk having it languish in some editorial slush pile. All in all, this is a pretty good choice because it allows him to avoid both of the dangers Ms. Novik points out: his work will not get stolen, nor will it go unread.

Maybe there’s hope for us writers after all.

Not so daily

I named this daily with every intention of posting to it on a daily basis, but that has proven to be more of a challenge than anticipated. In part, I haven’t been diligent enough about setting aside the time early enough in the day; I often find myself writing late at night after everyone is in bed, working against a midnight deadline but needing to decompress before I can be coherent. Another factor is my fear that what I write will be boring or irrelevant, coupled with my insistence that my writing be of a certain quality. While it’s good to hold myself to those standards, it’s not good to allow those standards to be an impediment.

So I’m turning the pile. I’ll begin writing at the first opportunity rather than leaving it for the dregs of the day. I’ll be a little less exacting and a little more willing to appear foolish or irrelevant or boring, trusting that the composite result will be of high quality even if individual morsels aren’t. After all, I did choose compost as my model, and heaven knows that compost starts out as a mess. I need to put my biodegradable refuse where my mouth is.