Category Archives: Poetry

Prompted poetry: this round

Here is another poem written last month in response to a 30/30 challenge prompt.

this round sun sits
golden in my hand
warm as a nesting bird
peachsoft with the summerripe
juices of dreams

Prompted poetry: out of luck

This is the second draft of something I wrote in response to a 30/30 prompt at the beginning of April. It’s more of a lark than anything, playing with words and form. Please let me know if it works.

it was a bad
run, being in the wrong
place at the wrong
time, up a tree or a creek
sans paddle, bush
whacked and ambushed at the end
of a long string we rode
into a box canyon and ran

Out of Luck

Prompted poetry: stars

NaPoWriMo (National Poetry Writing Month) may be over, but I’m still in a writing groove. This is the second draft of a poem I wrote a couple weeks ago; I’d love to have hear your responses or suggestions.

Stars

he said he would die
for the stars in her eyes
too young to know what
a slow death it would be

death by taxes and bills
ten-hour workdays and one
a.m. feedings     death by weddings
funerals and family reunions

emptied through that lengthy
dying we call life
his last breath is a prayer
for the stars in her eyes

(If you like to work from specifics, how does the space in the third line of the second stanza work? I originally had a semi-colon; do you think that would be better?)

Brain worm: an untitled poem

This poem is such fluff that it doesn’t even get asterisks.

the man in the Charlemagne suit
waves me over
leans down when I draw
near and whispers
Have you by any
chance a can opener handy?

 

Along with my apologies I offer the following explanation for today’s poem: I misread the title of Steve Berry’s The Charlemagne Pursuit in passing and couldn’t get the mistaken phrase out of my head until I wrote this. I suppose  that makes it more of an exorcism, really.

Found poetry: Okavango

This passage from an article in Smithsonian Magazine just presented itself as a poem when I read it this morning. The article, “Into the Okavango Delta,” by Paul Theroux, is beautifully written, haunting and lyrical, and accompanied by lovely photographs. (Smithsonian, April 2013, p. 81)

On safari

past the cushions and the lounge
chairs, beyond the rails of the wide
platform, the lagoon on this reach of

the Okavango was dark and depthless-
seeming, in shadow as the sun set
behind it, but the slanting sun gilded

the reeds of the marsh and glittered
on the boughs of the acacia trees on what
looked like floating islands in the distance

– Paul Theroux, “Into the Okavango Delta,” Smithsonian, April 2013, p. 81

 

Prompted poetry: deeper than thoughts

A poetry teacher once suggested that untitled poems could be headed with asterisks. I’m okay with leaving untitled poems without a heading, but I realize the title does help signal when a poem begins. What do you think?

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deeper than thoughts run
the roots of our actions
from fissures in the bedrock
they twine, the farthest reach
of their blind tendrils lost
to our knowing in the molten
mystery of our genesis

Prompted poetry: retelling

Responses and suggestions welcome!

the stories we tell
ourselves are roots that tangle
other stories in the dark
loam of time

the stories
we tell ourselves are stems
that twine and shoot
sunward in defiance
of gravity

the stories we tell ourselves
are blossoms whose fragrance fills
the air with longing

 

Prompted poetry: getting old

This was a 30/30 poetry prompt from last week. Responses or suggestions welcome!

Wisdom of Age

I have passed the threshold of possiblity
crossed the event horizon from expanding
universe into collapsing singularity
where time folds in on itself and matter
condenses with crushing persistence far beyond
the point where life and hope
cease to exist

Prompted poetry: promise

It’s time to pollute the blogosphere again with some of my poetic calisthenics. Please share responses and/or suggestions!

Flotsam of Fidelity

broken bits of promises lie
scattered on that futile
ocean whose treacherous bed
glitters with bones of wrecked
lovers forsworn in storms of deadly tedium
foundered in monotonous
habit of heart

Workshop poetry: Tarot de Paris

Wednesday night I facilitated a writing workshop at the library, “Creative Writing with Tarot.” Sixteen of us sat down with pen and paper and let ourselves get creative, with tarot cards for inspiration.

During one of the three-card spread exercises, I came up with a short poem for each of the cards I drew from the Tarot de Paris.

paris veilThe Veil

naked she stands above the moon
draped with light and her own
fragrant hair

paris sun

 

 

 

 

The Sun

the king is a fool who thinks
he is a god
the king is dead
long live the king

paris stallion of airStallion of Air

the moon’s horse cleaves
the night with chalken
hooves, its crystal breath
an icy cloud

 

 

 

(All images from the Tarot de Paris by J. Philip Thomas.)